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taltyman
01-30-2009, 07:26 AM
Make sure to read Sundown at Coffin Rock part 1 first....
The old man stood, watching as the sun eased toward the ridge, coloring the sky and the world red. Below them, the river still splashed among the stones, as it had for a million years. It's still going, the old man thought. There'll be someone left to carry on for me when I'm gone. It was harder to walk back. He felt old and purposeless now, and it would be easier, he knew, to give in to that aching heaviness in his left lung that had begun to trouble him more and more. Damn cigarettes, he thought. His leg hurt, and the boy silently came up beside him and supported him as they started down the last mile toward the house. How quiet he walks, the old man thought. He's learned well.

It was almost dark when the boy walked in. His father looked up from his paper. "Did you and your granddad have a nice walk?"

"Yes," the boy answered, opening the refrigerator. "You can call Agent Goodwin tomorrow. Gramps finally showed me where it is."

Scooter
01-30-2009, 08:14 AM
I don't know how to react to that. Great story with a seriously scewed up ending. God help us if it ever comes to that.

jan303
01-30-2009, 09:13 AM
Interesting. I agree with Scooter, not sure what to think.